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#TicckleTuesday #7: This week’s theme is maudlin. (This link provided by Ticckle Tuesday member Catherine Russell, a master of flash fiction in fantastically fast fashion.)


I decided to go with a haiku this week. The text version is below.


Harbor love softly, maudlin Mary Magdalene, or be charged with sin.

I realize this haiku requires a great deal of inference on the part of the reader. Please allow me a moment to elucidate.

I was referring to the etymology of maudlin {Middle English form of Mary Magdalene (typically depicted weeping)}

Also to the adjective maudlin meaning affectionate or sentimental in a tearful manner.

Also, addressing what some believe to be Mary Magdalene’s profession as a prostitute and her reformation after falling in love with Jesus.

It’s basically a story of a woman who falls in love, but is not permitted to be with the man she loves. She must “harbor her love softly”, meaning (1) it must be kept secret and (2) when she is with her lover, she must do so in a safe place. If anyone finds out, she’ll be scorned, possibly even physically punished (charged with sin). The use of “charged” implies that she would be judged and found guilty. Also, from the link provided by Ticckle Tuesday member Catherine Russell,

maudlin (noun) A Magdalene house; a brothel.

“harbor love softly” is a reference to providing a safe place for her lover to meet her discreetly. She the owner of the brothel, he visiting under the (credible) guise of a benevolent healer.

Stating the haiku as a warning, I hoped to imply that they were not wrong to love, but would have been poorly regarded had they loved openly.

Just the workings of my little mind. It is an awful lot to pack into a haiku.

maudlin – Wiktionary

About the Author

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Jessica West (West1Jess) is pursuing a state of self-induced psychosis (reading, writing, editing). She lives in Acadiana with three daughters still young enough to think she’s cool and a husband who knows better but likes her anyway.

0 Comments for "Mary Magdeline Haiku"

  • ganymeder

    Succinct and lovely!


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